I liked the melody, the instrumentation (the background synth lead and the drum part are particularly cool), and pretty much most of what I heard here. If there were one thing I'd change about it, I'd make the vocal part just a little clearer - I like how you octave doubled it, but it sounds to my ear slightly compressed/muted and it was a little hard to make out some of the lyrics.
Overall, though, I liked this song. Good job!
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